Friday Fictioneers – Debilitating Fear

Photo Credit: Rochelle Wisoff Fields

Suzzanne came to feeling disoriented. She had no idea how long she had been out for. The first thing she became aware of was the fact that she was pinned and couldn’t move. Fear set it almost immediately.

Claustrophobia was a very real problem for Suzzanne, almost debilitating.  A scream welled up in her throat, escaping. Suddenly, out of the corner of her eyes, she could see a body appear at the passenger side door.

“It’s ok, Suzzanne, you’re gonna be ok” the voice attached to the body said, “Just try to stay calm”… “That’s it nice deep breaths”

I concentrated my story on the car itself, not so much on the surrounding parts of the picture.

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